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Sleepless dreams.
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Sleepless dreams. |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
In my dreams, Oh my, sleepless dreams. Watch my sorrow subside, Watch my frown turn upside, Watch my smile burn bright and my pain hide, My hands around your waist, our lips collide, like birds of a feather, We soar together, Like a love poem written in hate, We contradict just to test fate, Whatever could a pen create? Like a poet on stage, My soul in a cage, Deamons tugging for my breath, I see the angels in your eyes, Pulling me from death, Like a love poem tries. I write to give your heart rise. [This message has been edited by N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet (08-04-2009 12:07 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I see the angles in your eyes," Did you mean angels? Enjoyed you rhyme here, and figured it needed a bump. |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Yes, thank you. Me and Grammar don't quite get along. Thank you for the feedback as well, haven't been getting much lately. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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