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Whisper To The Moon
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Whisper To The Moon |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Bill, now this is totally after my heart. Spectacular mountain scenery and beautifully matching romantic words. I am sure the moon records your whispers ....  Love, Margherita |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
the pleasure is always mine to read you mr romance  love ya, shellie |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I've never seen mountains in real life. Great write. It's always impressive to me when someone can write about falling in love with the Earth. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A beautiful picture Bill with great words to match. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - as you know I love the moon, especially on a starlit night with moonbeams shining down. Very romantic for sure... shellie - and my pleasure to read your gracious comments... viking_metal - the earth is a beautiful place, especially here in British Columbia. I see mountains with glaciers, clear cool rivers flowing, and all the wildlife one could think of. I love my dog also, and my truck, and find life can be simple... Lindsay - my friend, you are a special person... BC |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
How lovely is this poem!! And that last line...I am going back in to read it again. Great poem! Jan |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill This is a comforting poem. It is one that makes you think and you can feel your body relaxing and your mind think wonderful things. Very nice - I really enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Ariana |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Bill, I'm astounded by the beauty of your poem and glorious glacier! the nearest to perfection! Wow! Marvelous writing! misce' |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW, love this and the picture....how beautiful ~~**~~ |
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Rose of Sharon Junior Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 19 |
Bill, I have whispered to the moon a time or two. But, I couldn't have said it as lovely as you.GREAT WRITE! LOVE ,SHARON |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a nice picture/poem combination. Stop whispering to the moon though. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jbstillwater - I'm glad you liked the writing, and the last line... Ariana - inspiration comes from words as in your reply, and also others. Nothing like the mountains, and the moon at night. Oh, that darn moon does strange things... miscellanea - the glacier can be seen just across the river, and I see it every day... Greeneyes - beauty is in nature, and the way one sees it with their eyes, as you do... Sharon - sometimes when whispering the moon seems to answer back... Bobby - I've tried to stop whispering to the moon, but to no avail. Must be something about it... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Most eloquent elocution of your Uni-Verse soul's presentation. |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
beautifully romantic as always, bill. maranda |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Astonishing what some people can do with words... This is the first poem I've see from you (I'm pretty new,) and I'm very impressed. Maybe I'll go find some more... Hmmm... I think heart beat should be heartbeat (all one word) but I'm not for sure. Beautiful writing Rileigh |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Beautiful Bill! Both the picture and the poem. You are so talented. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You whisper ~ and the moon listens ~ and so do I ~ sigh...  This post is splendidly splendiferous! Hugs & Moon Light, Linda  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is just how the mountains look on the road to Anchorage in the winter. The moon creeps over the mountains just like that and I have yet to capture it in a picture. The poem is perfect with the picture, Bill. You do these so well. Alison |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the soft whisper breezing from the mountain top. This is so pretty, BC~ Enjoyed, very much! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Bill, whispering to the moon seems a very romantic idea and I love your beautiful poem, the picture is wonderful and the words fit perfectly. have a nice day yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - thanks for coming by... D. Lester Young - appreciate your reply... angellea - beautiful are your kind words... crosscountry83 - I'm glad you liked this humble writing, and thank you for coming by. I believe 'heart beat' is correct the way it's used in this writing, but thanks for this comment about it. Hope you find a few writings and like them as well... Oklahoma Rose - at times the picture and poem come together. Thanks for your kind words... Linda - love your word splendiferous, most magnificent... Hugs to you... Alison - thank you from the north country way up in Alaska. I'm sure you will capture that photo. Many nights like this in the BC mountains... Blues One - thanks for coming by and leaving your gracious words... 2islander2 - one of my favorites is seeing the moon at night. At times it answers when I whisper thoughts to it... BC |
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