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On Lammas Eve
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On Lammas Eve |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Upon defiant rocks break early twilight waves, broken shells losing pride hissing on these ancient sands; piled jetties slow the ride. I watch red setting sun bend shadows through a mist floating just above rip of evening's tide. Here alone, though not always been, mother mother ocean, I've missed you my dear friend. ©2009 by icebox . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, what a profound moment of reuniting, dear Charlie. This is how emotions become indelible. You write with a master's pen. Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ah, your friend and my mother, as I am a son of the sea :] Precise and passionate ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I have felt this. Brilliant work, so blindingly brilliant. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
warm salt spray sprinkles my lips I wade through the waves engulfing my hips arm held high caressing the tide as I find my way back home in sea's sigh. (Sounds like yours was lovely too.)  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovingly felt... |
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