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Untrodden paths of desire
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Untrodden paths of desire |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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Untrodden paths of desire * * * Your youth forges desires of new adventures and elicits songs of unknown resonance opening all the doors to paradise, slowly, one by one, just for you, to dance through. With gentleness and power you create magnetic attraction, smiles and cries, spontaneous replies to blushing bouquets of whys. In the milky mist of untrodden paths of desire your boldness meanders with nonchalance through hidden labyrinths of silken ponds, gifts of the night. Smooth and rough hills of delight offer sighs from stunned flowers blooming in moonlight. And dawn finds you, son of the sun, in poignant abandon, glued to your dunes glistening in pink hues. Your voice of primal purity, mingles harmoniously with the choir of birds, while awareness spreads its blanket of glory over Mother Earth, who stretches and sighs into the skies of blue, smiling her most dazzling smile, just for you. * * * |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this is one big sigh  I love it |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Man, I wish I knew where one of the untrodden paths were, I would walk right down it in a New York second. Is there someone you are thinking of when you wrote this? Nice write!!! |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
m,enjoyed your poem. it created a mood that took me back to a poem i wrote in "poetry #42". the poem was titled "a road not taken". |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Only a sweet gal like you could pen such lovely, dreamy thoughts so delicately. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. God bless, Rae |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Done with your usual perfection, Margherita. A treasure from the heart. Ida |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Dawn finds us all on the untrodden path of desire. Beautiful thoughts. Love, Hal |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...you make the young man of dreams sigh here...lovely work ms |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita Dolphina la Senorita que Bonita ~ Oh my, can you hear me sigh? You truly are a vessel of love and you write so dreamily of it.  I could read your poetry forevermore.  EA/AT |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Beautifully written and this really transported me to my teenage .Its a lovely piece to read and i felt like reading it again and again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Margherita, I think this is my new favorite of yours~~ beautifully expressed~~ M |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Dear Margherita, Beautifully penned, so tender and lovely write. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Just beautifully written, Margrit. I am a fan! Huggs Jan |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
After reading the poem, I went back and read it again. You can never tell that english is not your native tongue! You write beautifully and elegantly. The message that beams radiant light in your first stanza only opens many more to the next. This, my friend, is one of my favorites. to youARCTIC WIND |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, You write a whisper of love in this poem. It wraps around me. Thank you. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Each of you has brought a smile, thank you so much for your most loving replies! Love, Margherita  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Margherita, you are like a good bottle of wine, you are getting better with age and I say that in the nicest possible way. great post, love. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Margherita, I posted responses to your other two poems above this one but they wouldn't register. sorry, love Lindsay |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
"Blushing bouquets of whys", why you have outdone yourself in this breathtakingly beautiful poem dear Margherita, a truly gorgeous poem, lucky man say I Katriona |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello margherita, this is outstanding, one of your best. Smooth and rough hills of delight offer sighs from stunned flowers blooming in moonlight. splendid, make my day starting well... thanks for the wonderful poem. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lindsay, dear Katriona and dear Yann, thank you from my heart for your warm and generous replies! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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