Open Poetry #45 |
Once, Upon Another Time. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Once, upon another time; I gazed on love with trusting eyes; and, as the seasons came and went; I walked beneath blue, endless skies, believing love was fair, and kind to those in love... this truth was clear; though, they said Love is never easy... wise words I chose not to hear. Once, upon another time; across a star-drenched, velvet night, two heart-thoughts touched in harmony; and sparked a flame to burn so bright across the endless miles... or so, it seemed; those bright, sweet early days but, each rose has its hidden thorns; not seen by the enraptured gaze. Once, upon another time; it seemed we had the dream, declared; to walk together in the Sun; two hearts as one... two hearts that cared. But, then... the days grew longer; and her silences became the same; "Now you see me... Now, you don't; So, was it really, just a game? Once, upon another time; I gazed on love with trusting eyes; I still believe that love is kind; but, then... it's really no surprise; long-distance love... a fragile hope; it has no reason, and no rhyme; But, still, I sometimes wonder... what if ? Once, upon another time. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You so often speak what my heart wants to express but cannot. I understand this poem with my whole being. Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I sometimes wonder what thoughts might be able to find my mind if it wasn't overflowing with 'what if's. *S* Beautiful write, my friend! |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Not an easy situation but true love will prevail. And wonderful relationships have come out of long distance love. A beautiful write that reminds me of the way another English poet I know writes. Well done and well penned. Heart2Heart |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this write, nice to read your thoughts again...Tender ARCTIC WIND |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Breathtakingly beautiful. Life isn't about how to survive the storm... |
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