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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-07-13 05:23 PM




Once, upon another time; I gazed on love with trusting eyes;
and, as the seasons came and went; I walked beneath blue, endless skies,
believing love was fair, and kind to those in love... this truth was clear;
though, they said Love is never easy... wise words I chose not to hear.

Once, upon another time; across a star-drenched, velvet night,
two heart-thoughts touched in harmony; and sparked a flame to burn so bright
across the endless miles... or so, it seemed; those bright, sweet early days
but, each rose has its hidden thorns; not seen by the enraptured gaze.

Once, upon another time; it seemed we had the dream, declared;
to walk together in the Sun; two hearts as one... two hearts that cared.
But, then... the days grew longer; and her silences became the same;
"Now you see me... Now, you don't; So, was it really, just a game?

Once, upon another time; I gazed on love with trusting eyes;
I still believe that love is kind; but, then... it's really no surprise;
long-distance love... a fragile hope; it has no reason, and no rhyme;
But, still, I sometimes wonder... what if ?
Once, upon another time.





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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-07-13 05:30 PM


You so often speak what my heart wants to express but cannot. I understand this poem with my whole being.


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2 posted 2009-07-14 02:14 PM


I sometimes wonder what thoughts might be able to find my mind if it wasn't overflowing with 'what if's. *S*

Beautiful write, my friend!

Heart2Heart
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3 posted 2009-07-14 02:41 PM


Not an easy situation but true love will prevail. And wonderful relationships have come out of long distance love.   A beautiful write that reminds me of the way another English poet I know writes.  Well done and well penned.
Heart2Heart  

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4 posted 2009-07-14 09:49 PM


Enjoyed this write, nice to read your thoughts again...Tender


ARCTIC WIND

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2010-02-07 10:06 PM


Breathtakingly beautiful.

Life isn't about how to survive the storm...
But how to dance in the rain.

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