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Open Poetry #45

Come as you Are

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2009-06-08 03:53 PM

There was Music
and dancing

Laughter
and singing

You were honored

As the party continued,
the moon arrived.

The sun appeared

A bud blossomed

A young bird
took to the sky
for the very first time.

The Whole
of existence
celebrated

It celebrated you

Where were you?

The party is still going on.

Hope you can attend.

***

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-06-08 04:09 PM

Yo XOx Uriah xOX,

This is a great little poem. I like it loads.

I was there, you just didn't see me. I tend to blend in.

Bobby

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

2 posted 2009-06-08 06:12 PM

::smiles:: (((Bobby))) hahahaha ::bows::

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-06-09 12:13 PM

I love this... a party we can all enjoy... even those of us who tend to avoid social occasions. *S*

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2009-06-09 12:28 PM

But I was there! Then I heard a deep voice saying, "It is not yet your time."

So now I'm back here.

*ahem*

""No," Dorothy insists, "it wasn't a dream--it was a place." Pointing at Professor Marvel and her Uncle's three workmen, she adds, "And you--and you--and you--and you were there."

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm afraid the flying monkeys are not quite housebroken yet. (They left the indelicate details regarding the care and feeding of such creatures out of the story.)

What a world, what a world...

As you can see, I could relate to this in many ways, and now that I'm properly inspired, I guess I'll go sweep while I've still got a broom.

Teee-heee-heh-heeeeeeeeeeee! :witchypoosmile:

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2009-06-13 10:31 PM

I like this. I was there, but I was looking for Bobby. I hate it when he wears chamo to parties.

Seriously, I do enjoy your poems.

Alison

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