Open Poetry #45 |
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Off-Line. |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Another little sigh from the unrequited love series. (Not autobiographical!) Where have you gone? Why do you not answer me? Has our love faded, before came the time of full blooming? Were all our soft, whispered words really just words? was our promise a little white lie? I cannot believe this was all that that we shared; but now... all I see, when l call, is "Off-Line." "Off-Line," and the icy hand touches my heart... and in the touching, my heart gives a sigh. Was it something I said... or did not say, that changed us? Did you think I had some hidden design? I opened my heart to you, fell in love with you... wanted you with me, 'till the day l would die. But now, when I try to reach out with my words of love... there, staring at me... the dread word,"Off-Line." "Off-Line"... and a little bit more of me slowly dies... wondering, and worrying; not knowing why. Perhaps, you have had second thoughts... or perhaps, you have met someone else, with whom, your heart entwines. A promise of more than I ever could give you... for, in all honesty, I can't deny all I can offer is my heart, forever... my promise to you before you went "Off-Line." "Off-Line"... yet again... that word, simple... but deadly; and, as I gaze at it... my heart softly cries. All I have left is the memory of you, and memories of dreams we shared... not much to show: a scant epitaph for the hopes that we shared, my love; "Off-Line" perhaps... but, I still love you so. |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Off the line and in the poem. I enjoyed this, but I do not enjoy unrequited love. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() only in today's world does 'off-line' capture an age-old reality unrequited love.... remains a cornerstone of 'romantic' prose and poetry |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I loved it! My unrequited love has become my muse...so much written about him! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You know the human heart so well~ You write words, feelings and emotions as I would wish to explain them. ~Nice to read you! ~ARH |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and a little bit more of me slowly dies... wondering, and worrying; not knowing why. Perhaps, you have had second thoughts... or perhaps, you have met someone else, with whom, your heart entwines. I could lose myself in the poignancy of your words even if they didn't resonate as memories... Unrequited love hollows a person out until the emptiness echoes... and you've captured that ache so well! *S* Wonderful write! |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am enjoying this series of poems that you have shared with us. Your poetry often captures my attention and makes me stop to savor. Thank you. Alison |
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