Poem: "An End To It." (fun teenage thing)

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Open Poetry #45

Poem: "An End To It." (fun teenage thing)

mojox
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since 2009-06-05

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0 posted 2009-06-09 08:31 AM

The canned, nylon spring serpent of infatuation
Popped ignition from its slumber case
Though fated to be unsuccessful when cast as fugitive
(One attempting to break fast the umbilical pull of its host)
How it creates thrills, sudden attention, fun surprise
Whilst transparently traversing along the pugh of giggling college girls.

By Mojox aka Jim Moran O'Griston. This is by first online publication. I songwrite alot but have been reading up on poetry recently. I think this is close to one of Jim Morrison's poetic styles. I've been reading TS Eliot of late and its nothing like this. I also like Poe.

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2009-06-09 11:16 AM

I like giggling college girls. The make me giggle.

Nice write suh, welcome to Pippapipip.

-P

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Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-06-13 10:28 PM

Hey welcome to PiP. This is a fun read .. I am looking forward to reading more.

Alison

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