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Open Poetry #45

Separate Rooms

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-07-26 10:19 PM

Separate Rooms

Silently, I glimpse white lace on a silken spread.
Hesitant, beauty being one of the few things to make me so,
I slip into her room.
Her absence does little
to remove her presence, or my fear of it.
Slowly, cautiously, I move to her dresser.
Calloused hands move from one precious item to another,
admiring and caressing.
Each has its own special gift for me,
a man born to hard work and toil.
There is a feminine beauty so unique to her,
so ethereal in it's quality, that
it brings an ache to my stubborn heart
and warms the embers of a love
I alienated so many years ago.

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2009-07-27 02:13 AM

So sad, yoinn, but a stunning piece.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-07-27 06:00 AM

One of your very best, dear Yoinn.

A gesture that reveals your real feelings ...

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-07-27 01:44 PM

feel this yo

love,

berney

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

4 posted 2009-07-27 06:26 PM

Thanks Ida,

I do like to hear from you.

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

5 posted 2009-07-27 06:30 PM

Thanks "M" (margherita)

thats what im calling you now like the lady in 007 movies, lol

thanks again

Yoin

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