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A Poet's Tears of Love
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A Poet's Tears of Love |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A Poet's Tears of Love Upon the morning mist of cyan blue bliss, Can a poet’s tears spread rainbow’s kiss? With nature’s golden rays blossoming pleasure Of sunrise eyes in passion of delight’s treasure. Upon the drought canvas bleached so white, Can tears thoughts fall to contrast so right? In characters mental depth perceptions insight, Can letters sparkle black and white sunlight bright. Upon the storm reigning down tears depressive fright, Can flooding prayers arise hope, up in impressive flight? Oh poet, spread your wings spirit across the Universe, Where poetic Phoenix heartbeats create their Uni-Verse. Upon dreams trailing tears, can hate be defeated with love, Can our spirits reside in inspirational harmony with the doves? Oh sail, sail with me, billowing inside that tranquil verse flow, We are the destiny of our mind’s greatest potential growth glow. B) Upon tears Angel poet create your full spectrum miracle Poetry. Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit (a poet is born, not made) David Lester Young 07/27/09 © all rights owned by author De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (07-27-2009 09:23 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How exquisite! Yes, is my answer to the above question so beautifully expressed. Love, Margherita  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Margherita Thank You, may the doves of peace ride with your spirit of inspiration to the greatest heights. |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Dave YOur poetry cararies with it a atouch of Kalil Gibran and Milton, only done in your own style with rhyme and the use of divine word-play. You have a style that is very different and perhaps futuristic. This poem is a great example of this. Good writing! Jan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well done, poet. You sailed the blue sky with this poem. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
jbstillwater Thank You your words add magic to this dream writing poems. Midnitesun Thank You for you also blessed me with hope. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
tears to heal the world, you are a poetic prophet, just like Daniel, David, Jermemiah, Amos.... I agree with the above statements...  ~ARH |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A Romantic Heart Thank You for your words do also bless me. If in one poem, all poets voices could radiate love united in their uni-Verse of humanity into the whole Universe, would not God bless us with tranquility, at least for an instant moment illuminating peace. |
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