Open Poetry #45 |
Valley of the Buffalo: South Africa |
Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
Valley of the Buffalo The track to Ulundi From the wetlands of the Bashee Rose the saddle of Isandhlwana To the large and stony Koppie And the Nkandhla Range Bounded by the Malakata and Inhlazatye Down to the Buffalo Where the hills of Natal Cross the wide and shallow Donga's And the rivers cross the plain Beyond the conical Koppie's And the round thatched Rondavil's Run the trickling silver rivers That was Matyana's stronghold Where women harvested the grain And his Impi thousand strong Had washed their spears In the blood of the enemy they had slain. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very impressive, dear Johan! Why blood is still shed on the blessed ground of Earth is incomprehensible ... what a contrast you created to the beauty of harvesting women. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
so cool to go there and not go there.. enjoyed it!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It always amazes me that such beauty in this world, also can carry very ugly scars. Beautifully told. Carpe' Diem, |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, how lovely to read of my own beloved country (and not so far away from where I live, either). That battle was long ago and as terrible as battles are, all is forgiven which is a good thing, and pretty much forgotten which is not such a good thing, but then you told the tale, which again is a good thing. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
I remember this poem very well Johan, only one who has been there for some time can write so splendidly. So very well done my friend. Love Katriona |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You take us by the hand on a scenic journey through the splendor of Gaia's landscape. Then you artfully gift us with the image of women rhythmically swinging long blades while harvesting grain, against the image of the swing of a death-yielding sword, but end with a cleansing. A powerful succinct write. |
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