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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-07-22 07:39 PM

Another German Night

She was all things German
inside and out,
danke schoen & auf wiedersehen,
bratwurst & sauerkraut.

In a dance club
called Atlanta
she and I would meet
upon a Friday night
it was a small club
on the far side
where the locals met
to dance and fight.

Her favorite dance
was the slow dance,
they were my favorites too
to hold her close in my arms
was making dreams come true.

There I could inhale her fragrance,
there I could enjoy her gracefulness,
while I kissed her soft & supple lips,
we danced away another German night
within the embrace of our fingertips.

JamesLee
21July
2009

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-24-2009 06:16 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-07-22 08:22 PM

yep, German girls rock

lol

and so do slow dances with lots of kisses!!

angellea
Member

since 2009-03-29

Posts 144
NC, USA

2 posted 2009-07-22 08:54 PM

very romantic, james. made me sway to the music.

maranda

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2009-07-22 10:07 PM

You are a genuine born romantic James
and you wrote a very poignant poem.

You certainly meet some lovely young ladies over there in Hawaii, you lucky man you.
great write.

Lindsay

faeriemythc
Junior Member

since 2009-06-18

Posts 40
KY

4 posted 2009-07-22 11:07 PM

I like this. German girls do rock. There isn't a private message space on here so I'm gonna post it in this reply. Thank you is danke schoen and I think the other word you were saying is goodbye or see you again and that is auf wiedersehen. Hope I didn't offend. Good write!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-07-23 07:06 PM

Thank you Sea, angellea, Lindsay and faeriemythc for the wonderful responses...I made the corrections...James

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2009-07-24 12:10 PM

James,

You show your romantic side so well in your poetry. I love this.

Alison

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2009-07-24 05:35 AM

Hi James, this is so well and subtle, all emotions "en retenue" thanks for the beautiful moment.

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2009-07-24 05:44 AM

Oh, James, you romantic you! Being hungry in this moment makes me think of what pleasure it would be to have a Bratwurst right now ... kisses can wait!

"Auf Wiedersehen" ... (dear fairiemythc spelled it right, you have to change the "l" into "h").

Sometimes simply reading German words makes me so tremendously nostalgic (though I am a Swiss "girl"