Open Poetry #45 |
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Goin' Nuts |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA ![]() |
Goin' Nuts ![]() Across the lawn and ‘round the tree Pausing to look, “Where can it be?” You hid it here or so you thought But it’s not in your hiding spot A flash of brown has caught your eye And then you spot the guilty guy You look about as if to say “That bugger stole my nut away” How dare he have the nerve to swipe Your hard earned prize so sweet and ripe But now you’re gonna make him pay That dirty crook will rue this day You stand up straight on tiny toes He looks at you and off he goes Right on his heels with bushy tail He won’t escape, you’re on his trail Round and round the tree you go You start and stop, first fast then slow Then up the tree right to the top And down again without a stop You peek around the trunk and then The chase starts over once again ‘Til finally you claim your prize Then hop away with sparkling eyes You place your trophy in the ground Warning your foe with chattered sound “Best stay away, no “ifs” or “buts” And keep your paws off of my nuts” He looks at you then slinks away But you know he’ll be back next day This pesky guy is like no other Because he is your little brother
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
heheheh! I adore your poems! Squirrels are so entertaining, exactly the way you describe. I used to watch them and the chipmunks steal birdseed from the bluejays. It was a war! My daughter wrote about one of her neighbors who was in a war, himself, with the squirrels. The squirrels won. ![]() I loved this, and the picture is a beauty, too. [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (07-24-2009 01:06 PM).] |
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savedbygrace713 New Member
since 2009-07-23
Posts 5 |
Terrific poem! Great job sustaining the mood of the chase and getting so many stanzas out of the scene. ![]() Traci |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Squirrels want to play with you because you are a lubbable big nut! ![]() I love squirrels ~ and nuts! There's nuttin' about this poem that I don't like! ![]() Loves 'n nuts, Linda ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A delightful read, dear Stephen! Tough fun! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love those little buggers!! I just recently put out a bird feeder, my first lol then I saw a squirrel in there and got him his own feeder! ![]() such a cute write! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This squirrel's eye view is so cute, Stephen. ida |
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