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Teen Poetry #9

I'm In Pieces

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2010-01-17 02:05 PM

I'm walking in a direction
where nothing makes sense.
Its bare and filled with nothing,
and yet I see everything.

While I walk the road,
pieces of my heart fall.
I won't make it to the end,
because there'll be nothing left.

I'm running to you in pieces,
because I can't do this anymore.
I need you to make me well again,
I need you to believe in me.

These pieces are terrible,
there's one for each person
who hurt me deeply.
Can you put me back together?

I don't have the glue or tape
that I need to do this.
I need your love to help me
put my life together again.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

1 posted 2010-01-17 09:56 PM

This poem was above your usual standards!! You are really coming along as a poet.

I hope to see more like it in the future.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2010-01-17 11:02 PM

thanks so much! i didn't think this was that great, but i'll let others decide that, haha.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

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