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Teen Poetry #9

never enough

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2010-01-13 04:10 AM

hey guys i know i kinda dropped off the radar for a while there, got caught up in the holiday season i guess. This poem isn't my best at all just something thats been bugging me. Hope all is well

You ask me for my help
And I come running straight away
Ready to do anything
Just to brighten up your day

You say you need to talk
Next thing we’re on the phone
And I’m up till 4am
So you don’t feel so alone.

You ask me to stay and hold you
to help you forget for a while
And so I lay down next to you
In hope to see you smile

But no matter what it is I do
Or how long I’m by your side
I still can’t make you happy
But don’t say I never tried

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2010-01-13 08:11 AM

A-Mazing.. i feel this SOO much atm..

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

2 posted 2010-01-13 03:32 PM

again another great poem. really can relate. i have had writers block latly.
great write it flowed.

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