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Teen Poetry #9

I feel alone

Sheen
New Member

since 2010-01-10

Posts 7
Hawaii,US

0 posted 2010-01-13 01:16 AM

I feel alone,
without your comfort
without your love,
I feel depressed
about two stars above.
Both picked by you and I,
but as I gaze upon them
this night, I fall and cry.
I live but feel numb,
for once I felt you
in my heart but I was dumb
to actually believe
that you loved me.
yet I was blind,
I did not see.
Never mind then,
which was the past
I have moved on
with a different cast.
But in this world,
till I die to bone
I will live on

and still feel alone....

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

1 posted 2010-01-13 03:35 PM

nicly written. it had a flow. gave a good picture. great write keep it up.

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