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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2010-01-11 12:16 PM

Drunken words plunge off
A trembled voice,
Into waves of wild winds,

With a snicker and a smile,
That swims

In and out
Of chipped lips.

With a dimple, or two, or three,
That disappear
Then reappear,
With delightful insanity.

With an, "Aha, ha-ha, hee-hee,"
Till a single fall
And a deep sleep,
Ends,

A drunken infidelity.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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1 posted 2010-01-12 08:57 AM

I really love how there's not many words in this poem. Lol. Its really good for its simplicity.

Love it hun.

-Zach

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2 posted 2010-01-12 12:28 PM

from the title, I wasn't sure I was going to like this, but I did.

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 2010-01-12 01:10 PM

Thanks!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

m48
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4 posted 2010-01-12 03:45 PM

interesting i kinda got a little lost,but eh it was good.

freeand2sexy
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5 posted 2010-01-13 12:23 PM

Thanks for the comment!

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde

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