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Sky Eyes
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Sky Eyes |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Not my best work to be honest. I'll most likely rewrite the last stanza cause it kinda sucks. But enjoy! :] -----------------------------------------------------  They say that life is full of second chance Another way to play our cards for another try Another hope to try this thing called romance Its crazy yet worth it but its rules I'll abide Yes it takes a bit of luck to win this game Not everyone will rise victorious in this fray But we all yearn for that feeling all the same So put on your makeup and put up a display Flaunt what you got lovey and trust me you got it all Those Sky Eyes are your trusty tool But don't be sorry when on your knees you'll come back to crawl. For we're all not lucky here just another fool. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
i for one, think its just fine. i always love the way you write, because it always makes sense and is relatable from alot of points of view. great write once again!  library. julianna |
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