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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
~Expectations~ I lose myself in fiction to forget what's truly real and fall in love with characters so I'll never have to feel the pain of being lonely the pain of being me in a world so full of liars it's just so hard to see that we should just be honest simply speak our hearts tell the story as it is be upfront at the start you see, although we all have morals few ever rise above so in a world full of deceivers fictionals are my true loves ____________________________ hope you like it! Honest comments please! xoxo, Jaki H |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Excellent topic and poem. I think each of us at one time has fallen into a world of fiction to escape reality. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
this poem is so true, its so hard for people to be honest in relationships. great write  |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I do exactly that. Reality can be boring and hard so I escape into exciting fiction books. You explained that fact very well. -Zach |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
i like the last part "fictionals are my lovers " thats a line that sticks. |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
thank you all <3 I'm glad you like it |
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