Self-Absorbed in a Hurting World

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Teen Poetry #9

Self-Absorbed in a Hurting World

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2010-01-03 04:44 PM

I most definately need to be writing more, this is one of my worst ever, and I kinda like the message, but its messily put together and doesn't make much sense, at least to me. So, tell me what you think, because...my opinion isn't that great, haha.

Oh...and the title sucks too, sorry.

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There are days in our lives
where we feel needed and loved.
Days where its all wonderful,
when we feel like we belong.

Sometimes its so amazing,
you forget about reality
and the struggles of people around you.
You forget the real you.

Its like we've been erased,
and we're searching for who we are.
We walk this world carelessly,
not caring about the ones that matter.

We need to see those hurting,
they need someone with open arms too.
Its not just about us,
its about the love for others first.

We need to step out of our big houses
with our new cars and latest gadgets.
We need to recognize the ones in pain,
so that maybe you'll find yourself again.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]