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Broken Angel
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Broken Angel |
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UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Broken teardrops falling down an angel's face. Broken eyes look from a broken angel's grace. A broken heart lives a broken lie. Broken tears. The angel's life. An angel's greif falls on the world in the form of rain. The skyward tears reflect the broken angel's pain. A crumbling heart; a shattered soul. Who doesn't cry those broken teardrops anymore. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
awwwww  *tear*beautiful... only a vampire can love you forever. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Nicely done! |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
nicely written. it made me think.keep up the good work. |
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Snow_Angel Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17 |
This is very nicely written. It brings a tear.  Good Job |
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MadMarcus Junior Member
since 2009-11-25
Posts 25Sweden, Solna |
You made me cry ^^ This poem is fantastic! |
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duckboy New Member
since 2010-01-02
Posts 8 |
Great job, I like the style |
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