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Friday Night Fright.
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Friday Night Fright. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia 
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I know this one just seems to go on and on but i felt like i just had to get it all out of my system. Enjoy. ___________________________________________________________ All dolled up and no place to go we popped the bottle; my first blow. One glass, two glass five glasses more. Just a little blurry, Should’ve stopped at four. phony excitement gets the better of us down the road we go stumbling without fuss. The lights make me dizzy And so I begin to roam You said just one minute And I will walk you home Staggering in the gutter Singing my own song Didn’t see it coming Couldn’t sense the wrong. All messed up Trying to find my way Something catches my eye Who they hell are they? My mind ticks over I fumble for my phone Look back at all the shots That left me here alone. I type in your number I know it by heart Phone rings out And its all about to start Redial redial redial Panick settles in Im yelling at the dial tone Like it can save me from their sin One punch two punch Five punches more Down on the ground Wondering whats in store I close my legs I clench them tight I’ll risk my life To win this fight The phone is ringing I reach for mine They’re screaming now And at last resign In the dark I sit and stare I start to cry; Send up the flare All dolled up And no place to go Where were you When I took my final blow. Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
it did go on and on and on but honey it was worth it. You have such a lovely choice of words. Even i couldn't beat it. Keep writting.  -Zach |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Amazing!!.. LOVE IT!!.. Well Done Lea!! |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
Thankyouu for your nice comments and Zach of course you could write something like this, and a zillion times better |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
again another great right. your poems are stories of their own and each one just a little diffrent then the last. |
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duckboy New Member
since 2010-01-02
Posts 8 |
that was simply amazing |
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