Teen Poetry #9 |
My Freedom is in Your Hands |
Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
This is a "work-in-progress/something-that-just-popped-into-my-dead/writer's-block-poem". So its not my greatest. ~ Click. Click. I hear the camera flash. Click. Click. I know you're twisted mind. Click, click, click. Please stop doing this. Click. I want to run away. I'm followed every day, by the constant clicking sound. I live my life in fear, because of those pictures. I know you need a friend, I know you need to be loved. Please don't do this to me... I can help you stop this obsession. julianna |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I sure thought it was good, and the message sent is terrific! I saw a t.v. special on kids falling into this type of "occupation" which will only lead to disaster later in life. Look at Miss America! Well done! |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thank you very much Mysteria! i'm glad you liked it. julianna |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow Julianna! i really love this one..for its errie stalker-ish mood. xD |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
haha, oh zach. you would love it because of that. but thank you julianna |
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ThatOneGuy Junior Member
since 2009-10-27
Posts 33Indiana, United States |
i haven't read one like this before. (and not sure if i've seen any of your work)but i like it alot good job! |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
wow its kind of creepy in a way! i love it! |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thank you ThatOneGuy & Jaki H! julianna |
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duckboy New Member
since 2010-01-02
Posts 8 |
I didn't really get the stalkerish idea that most point out, almost seemed like the high school dilemma of the girl being pressed for photos of herself. I enjoyed it . |
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