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Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2009-12-19 05:45 PM

This is a "work-in-progress/something-that-just-popped-into-my-dead/writer's-block-poem". So its not my greatest.
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Click. Click.
I hear the camera flash.
Click. Click.
I know you're twisted mind.

Click, click, click.
Please stop doing this.
Click.
I want to run away.

I'm followed every day,
by the constant clicking sound.
I live my life in fear,
because of those pictures.

I know you need a friend,
I know you need to be loved.
Please don't do this to me...
I can help you stop this obsession.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-12-19 08:22 PM

Well I sure thought it was good, and the message sent is terrific! I saw a t.v. special on kids falling into this type of "occupation" which will only lead to disaster later in life. Look at Miss America!

Well done!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2009-12-19 08:24 PM

thank you very much Mysteria! i'm glad you liked it.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2009-12-20 10:31 AM

Wow Julianna! i really love this one..for its errie stalker-ish mood. xD

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2009-12-20 01:03 PM

haha, oh zach. you would love it because of that. but thank you

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

ThatOneGuy
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 33
Indiana, United States

5 posted 2009-12-26 02:03 AM

i haven't read one like this before. (and not sure if i've seen any of your work)but i like it alot

good job!

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

6 posted 2009-12-28 11:34 AM

wow its kind of creepy in a way! i love it!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

7 posted 2009-12-28 12:28 PM

thank you ThatOneGuy & Jaki H!

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

duckboy
New Member

since 2010-01-02

Posts 8

8 posted 2010-01-02 03:41 AM

I didn't really get the stalkerish idea that most point out, almost seemed like the high school dilemma of the girl being pressed for photos of herself. I enjoyed it

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