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A Kid Like Me
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A Kid Like Me |
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NicoleRocker12367 Junior Member
since 2009-01-07
Posts 12MA, United States |
When your a kid like me, Days pass slowly or fast No choices but to see every bit of the past Every kid like me, sees a change in mood in every person around them moody people, crazy people Normal doesn't seem to exist Drama swirls around like leaves on bright fall days They can't seem to resist the compusion, temptation hurtful lies or uncovered truth gossip brings to them Friendships end Some begin You can never really tell when a person who was good to you will change their style just like that Relationships change cheating kills every single heart looks and smiles matter too much in every single trial. I'm sure when you finish this poem short but long You'll see, i'm sure you'll see that your a kid like me a crazy, confused wannabe kid like me |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am a rather "older" kid like you. Nicely done. |
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Ravagence Member
since 2009-08-16
Posts 79 |
Makes me never want to grow up.  I love it. |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
i loved reading this poem, i felt a mixture of happiness and sadness, because truth is i know deep down i'll always be a "wannabe kid" thanks for sharing this  -Lee |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
haha I am a kid (kinda) and i absolutely love this! but one thing is that if your going to rhyme in your poem make it consistent. -Zach |
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duckboy New Member
since 2010-01-02
Posts 8 |
Last stanza was simply...epic, I enjoyed it |
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