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Shimowada=Marshall in Japanese.
| Teen Poetry #9 |
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Shimowada=Marshall in Japanese. |
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minitechie Junior Member
since 2008-05-26
Posts 23california |
This is the original, I love you, You left me, You held me, You lied to me. I never thought you would, You told me you wouldn't You said you loved me, You loved my body. You showed me you cared, You told me lies, You held me close, You hit me hard. Your eyes would glow, The honesty was low. I was lost in false truths, Yet, I loved you so. Why, I do not know. This is the revised. I loved you, You left me, You held me, You lied. I never thought you would, You told me you wouldn't You said you loved me, You only loved me for my body. You showed me you cared, You told me your lies, Everyday i cried. You held me close, It hit me hard. Your eyes were like lightning, They gleamed like diamonds. Your honesty was low, I was lost in your lies. I loved you so, Why, I do not know. Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter. |
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minitechie Junior Member
since 2008-05-26
Posts 23california |
letting everyone know i was not actually hit by him phisically. what he did hit my heart hard. Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter. |
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