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Teen Poetry #9

Now That It's Fallen

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-12-12 08:59 PM

- Dedicated to my friend Katie. I need to add more, but right now i've run out of creative juices. :|

I feel as though I'm breaking,
I can't work this out.
Why is death such a burden?
Why is life filled with doubt?

Now that the snow has fallen,
you're always on my mind;
Taken away without a thought,
leaving the world behind.

I'll miss you for eternity,
my heart will always cry.
And every snowfall from now on,
I'll look up to the sky.
{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (12-12-2009 10:43 PM).]

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

1 posted 2009-12-12 09:26 PM

A very special tribute. Wonderful

Zeitgeist

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-12-12 10:44 PM

Thank you

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

3 posted 2009-12-14 08:23 PM

wow what a tribute.that was really sweet. i liked it.it brought a tear.

ThatOneGuy
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 33
Indiana, United States

4 posted 2009-12-15 04:09 PM

this is really good. and something i think a lot of people can relate to. good work

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-12-17 11:29 PM

Thanks to both of you. I truly do appreciate your comments.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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