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Teen Poetry #9

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minitechie
Junior Member

since 2008-05-26

Posts 23
california

0 posted 2009-12-17 01:32 PM

Im still in love,
It's someone I can't have.
He lied to me,
Or so it seems.

He left me,
I tried to stay.
I thought he would come back,
Glancing my way.
He left me in the summer,
The eighth month of the year,
The 13th day.
I miss him,
Even today.

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-12-17 01:40 PM

That happens and you wrote it so well.

Happy Holidays
♥ Mysteria ♥

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

2 posted 2009-12-17 03:00 PM

awwww ive so been here. feelings for you! smile and remember every cloud has a silver lineing.

minitechie
Junior Member

since 2008-05-26

Posts 23
california

3 posted 2009-12-18 11:23 AM

yea true. as my old biology teacher said, "There are more fish in the sea, some slimy some clean. Yet know this, there is a fish for every fishermen in the sea."

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

Snow_Angel
Junior Member

since 2009-12-18

Posts 17

4 posted 2009-12-18 08:23 PM

I love what your biology teacher said. This was very good. I enjoyed it

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2009-12-19 07:04 AM

I think everyone has been through something like this. Well written.

-Zach

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