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a ramble to you
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a ramble to you |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
~please comment,thank you.~ broken glass lay on the floor shadderd love from before lasting only minutes for mistrust showing life in darkness not just lust though when you first arived i still felt shy you smiled and took my hand said you understood i didnt believe you now i do you may never realize just what you are to me sometimes you take my breath away so i cant speak but thats just fine you saw the light when i thought the mirror lied so take this key and come inside im opening the door just a slit like i never thought i could again |
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watchingsummer New Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 8USA |
that was really good, it got me thinking. good job! "If I know what love is, it is because of you." -Hermann Hesse |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
thank you im glad you enjoyed it! |
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