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m48
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0 posted 2009-12-14 08:40 PM



we sit in front of the tv
suddenly its decided
lets play a game
sit still
here is how it goes
first you ask a question
then the answer comes next
next is a shirt
if you arent right
finally
naked you realize
its late at night
suddenly the game becomes more fun
so you play again
its ok
its alright
the game should take all night

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1 posted 2009-12-15 12:27 PM


You set your scene well in this.

            
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m48
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2 posted 2009-12-15 04:21 PM


thank you for your feed back i appriciate it very much!
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