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poindexter39
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since 2009-11-19
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0 posted 2009-11-28 08:22 AM



Rapid with no hesitation
Like a language with no translation
Like a book with no explanation

You consume my heart as fast as a hawk
To you I'm nothing but a dork
To you my whisper is a scraping chalk
While my love can stretch to the city of New York

You swat me away like a little fly
While the hatred you feel flows by
If you only you knew
That all I saw
Was you

Before you met me I was written off
And when i spoke you'd go cough cough
I was crushed to hear that since day 1
You referred to me as the ugly one

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Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
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1 posted 2009-11-29 01:02 PM


I enjoy the contrast between more classical poetic features and modern-day stuff.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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