Hey Satan, Send Me An Angel

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Teen Poetry #9

Hey Satan, Send Me An Angel

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2009-11-09 10:44 PM

Give me a reason, a reason to trust you
when all these things you say are untrue
You don't bother to think of what you do to me
and i guess my love was too deep for you to see

and i'll breathe a little harder now
since,i was always wrong and shall
you cross me off the list
and the lies appear out of the mist

and as i sit here and think
it all begins to link
you left me for a cheater like you
which makes all the rumors true

You unlocked the gate
for satan's own cupid, heartbreak
so satan send me an angel please
to ruin my life a little more ease

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-11-10 08:15 AM

Dude.. this is EPIC! Like whoa dude.. I didn't know you had it in you to write something like this.

Great job dude! Library of course.

-Zach

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-11-11 05:49 PM

see? I told you it was good.
well...okay I didn't really say that, I just said that I liked it. But it is very good. :P

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EmilyTheStrange
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...popsicle!

Stitches
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since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

3 posted 2009-11-29 01:12 PM

Not sure why but I think this would make a lovely song.

Maybe there are nice lyrical/rhythmic qualities?

I don't know but I love it. Read it about three times. xD

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

4 posted 2009-11-30 04:41 PM

thanks!

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