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poindexter39
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since 2009-11-19
Posts 8


0 posted 2009-11-27 12:43 PM


Rapid with no hesitation
Like a language with no translation
Like a book with no explanation

You consume my heart as fast as a hawk
To you I'm nothing but a dork
To you my whisper is a scraping chalk
While my love can stretch to the city of New York

You swat me away like a little fly
While the hatred you feel flows by
If you only you knew
That all I saw
Was you

Before you met me I was written off
And when i spoke you'd go cough cough
I was crushed to hear that since day 1
You referred to me as the ugly one


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HolsJoscelyne
Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23
Colchester, United Kingdom
1 posted 2011-04-06 01:40 PM


Interesting,
but really clever writing!

Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com

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