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Teen Poetry #9
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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
Posts 222
Oregon
0 posted 2009-11-22 11:13 PM

Death shall reign
yet hope remains.
A pinpoint light
of brilliancy
amidst a starless night.

Hope shall rule
with death its tool.
The darkened hold
on snow-white sheet
to make you blood run cold.

Death;life.
Dark; light.
Foes to balance
wrong and right.

Yin; Yang.
Scorn; praise.
As dark collides
with dawn's first rays.  
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Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25
Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia
1 posted 2009-11-23 04:50 AM

i loved the way you used the contrasts in this, great write
madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
2 posted 2009-11-23 11:50 PM

This reminded me of two things
1. My great grandmothers funeral (sorrow)
2. The relization she was in a better place(joy)

It was a great read and keep them coming...
Stitches
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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
United Kingdom
3 posted 2009-11-27 11:40 AM

Really nice use of the drastic contrasts.

Kind of shows how everything intermingles.

Two sides of one coin right?

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