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Teen Poetry #9

Autumn Leaves

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

0 posted 2009-11-19 09:31 PM

Autumn leaves,
Angel wings,
This one must have;
fallen from the trees.

Golden eyes,
glimmering in the moonlight,
Glowing hair;
flowing like honey.

Slowing My earth down,
she fell like a comet,
Burning her way,
so beautifully complex.

Thou not beautiful,
but you are what I need,
to make me complete for;
I could never love anything so less imperfect

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-11-19 10:12 PM

Just like a leaf we all have our seasons, and although we may like one over another, it takes all four to make a season. So too is it with beauty both out and in to measure one's radiance. Well done.

Rosie_Orange
Junior Member

since 2009-04-20

Posts 46
South Africa

2 posted 2009-11-20 08:12 AM

i love the comparison and the descriptions! well done

Lost girl..

Find me?

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2009-11-20 07:17 PM

Lovely write! I really like it!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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