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Forever Yours |
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poindexter39 New Member
since 2009-11-19
Posts 8 |
Forever and ever We will stay together Our lives can't be controlled By a mere lever I was once told Love lasts forever But when u left I was a victim of theft When we first met From the first moment I made a bet That we would care Care for each other Forever and ever When we cared Cared for each other For the first time Love was found When yo left left Left with another For the first time Heartbreak was found |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
great first post!!!! brought tears to my eyes... can totally relate!! loved it! Always, |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A very poignant first post. Welcome to the Teen Forum at Passions, and we all hope you will like it here as much as we do. |
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poindexter39 New Member
since 2009-11-19
Posts 8 |
Thx for the reply I usually get teased about poetry Thankyou for the comment p.s i kind of messed up the last stanza it's supposed to go When you left Left with another For the first time Heartbreak was found |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Welcome to Pip!! Nice poem! The hardest part about writing poetry, |
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