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poindexter39
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since 2009-11-19
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0 posted 2009-11-19 01:59 AM



Forever and ever
We will stay together
Our lives can't be controlled
By a mere lever

I was once told
Love lasts forever
But when u left
I was a victim of theft

When we first met
From the first moment
I made a bet
That we would care
Care for each other
Forever and ever

When we cared
Cared for each other
For the first time
Love was found

When yo left left
Left with another
For the first time
Heartbreak was found


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precious pearls
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1 posted 2009-11-19 08:02 PM


great first post!!!! brought tears to my eyes... can totally relate!! loved it!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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2 posted 2009-11-19 10:09 PM


A very poignant first post.  Welcome to the Teen Forum at Passions, and we all hope you will like it here as much as we do.  
poindexter39
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since 2009-11-19
Posts 8

3 posted 2009-11-20 12:36 PM


Thx for the reply
I usually get teased about poetry
Thankyou for the comment
p.s i kind of messed up the last stanza it's supposed to go

When you  left
Left with another
For the first time
Heartbreak was found

Sunshine
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4 posted 2009-11-20 04:42 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Please check your email for a
Very special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
5 posted 2009-11-20 07:20 PM


Welcome to Pip!!

Nice poem!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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