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Rosie_Orange
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since 2009-04-20
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South Africa

0 posted 2009-11-13 07:18 AM


you call me stupid.

you watch my pain.

sometimes you ask what’s wrong.

you see my tears.

you see me.

or do you?

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1 posted 2009-11-14 08:31 PM


I think some wear blinders.
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2 posted 2009-11-15 04:28 PM


Nice post. Pretty blunt but good. lol

-Zach

Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
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3 posted 2009-11-15 08:19 PM


I find some people just enjoy to see someone in pain so they can act nice to make them look like a nice person. It's blunt, but that's the mood you want; kind of sour.
Rosie_Orange
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South Africa
4 posted 2009-11-16 06:54 AM


thanks, i know its blunt, but i'm a to the point person.

Lost girl..

Find me?

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