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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
leave already just get out just go die i'm better without you once wanted my dead now this is my creed: you must die now cause you're killing me i regret the time i save you the 1st, 2nd and last it wasn't worth the fight i wish i could change the past seriously, i hope it's slow i hope it hurts you too then you'll be gone forever so i don't ever have to see you yes i'm full of malice it's true, i don't care but you're filling me with rage just because you're sitting there so just go kill yourself not like you haven't tried before sorry that i stopped it go do it just once more it's just not enough that you're dying on the inside i want you torn apart and lying in the grave so leave already witch just go on and go die please just do die cause i'm seriously better without only a vampire can love you forever. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is a seriously intense rant I must say. I always have to hope that people with these kind of anger issues find a way to turn it around, and communicate to be heard a little better.  |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
hahaha yea...lol but i wasn't angry when i wrote this. lol i've had writer's block so i've been messing around trying to write in other POVs and whatnot..and this came out haha |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You succeeded in doing an other's POV well.  |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thank you only a vampire can love you forever. |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
so deep...so powerful...so much anger...loved it, can totally relate -Kai |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanks kai! only a vampire can love you forever. |
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Rosie_Orange Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46South Africa |
its quite incredible! from the first line, i wanted to read the whole poem, and it really hits emotions! |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thank you! it means a lot. it's the first i've written in months only a vampire can love you forever. |
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