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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2009-01-19 08:36 PM

I'll never live up to their expectations
Never do exactly as they want
I'll never be able to truly please them
Three thoughts which continue to haunt

You tell me
I'm great
Never should I change
I still can't understand...
Why do you put up with me?

Please...
I dont ever want to rememeber
What life was like before you
Wipe out the recollection completely
And just hold me here forever

For the first time, because of you,
Someone sees the best in me
For once, I matter
No longer am I just 'some girl'
I'm your girl
And that's all I ever want to be
You took the 'just'
Out of "just Cierra Leigh"

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2009-01-19 09:29 PM

Wow, when I was first reading this piece I honestly didn't know what to expect. Throughout your writing it kept getting better and better, and I like the way you had some rhyming in there too!
When I came to the last stanza I was like "aww...!!!!", so it was really good.
Library fer sure.

?ul!@nn@

these broken pieces of my heart are to shattered to be put back together again

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2009-01-20 12:11 PM

This is great.. made me cry.. maybe cause i wish that somebody would take the just from my name..

lilmissflyaway
Junior Member

since 2009-01-19

Posts 15
ohio,usa

3 posted 2009-01-20 07:55 AM

i love it
it was rlyy good

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2009-01-20 08:11 AM

Aww this is soo sweet. Happy endings always make me smile.

hehehe.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

5 posted 2009-01-20 08:49 AM

OMG so unexpected but I totally love it

yay library for sure great right

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2009-01-20 09:55 AM

You brought the past alive with this, as our names sound similar...I like this very much, as I remember the time when the "just" was removed from my name too.

Thank you for the love of this.

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