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Transcending Moments |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
(Note: I have been gone from this site for a long time. However, I plan to start posting regularly again.) Death is only a door to a world filled with something more Its gates, planted in the sky, are waiting open wide A new adventure may lay behind the doors to life But those who seek it must decide if they will leave tonight For in a moment the gates will close shut again And the sky will drop upon the earth signaling the end For the holy fury will ignite its wrath on the world And those who are left behind will be burnt. "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All |
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lilmissflyaway Junior Member
since 2009-01-19
Posts 15ohio,usa |
i rlyy liked it i understand where ur comin from |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Nice write. Glad to have you back.  -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Nice poem, but to be honest, maybe i'm just out of it today, but i don't get it. With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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