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0 posted 2009-11-05 07:58 PM


"Chasing Butterflies"

The loneliness I threw away
Has begun to surface
In the darkness blooms
our despair
I'm sorry
that I avoided your dreams
But it felt as
though I would be left behind
while you chased butterflies
Without knowing the reason why
I realized the sadness
of the song we sang together
Instead of saying 'good-bye
You smile so kindly
it breaks my heart
Even in the days we can't meet
i want to hold on to you
Sincerely yours with all my heart
we're chasing butterflies
feeling the pain of that song
we set forth on our journeys
close to tears
The promises we made unchanged
maybe someday we'll look back fondly


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1 posted 2009-11-06 08:12 AM


I really liked this.

"Instead of saying 'good-bye
You smile so kindly
it breaks my heart"

Loved those lines. Keep up the great work.

-Zach

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