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Teen Poetry #9

burdens of the past.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2009-10-02 03:18 AM

Do u remember the times
That you so calmly struck my face?
Threw me to the ground,
In my own disgrace.

Perhaps you have forgotten
How your words ripped through my skin,
Dug their way to my heart,
And began this war within.

To you it’s all in the past,
Buried with my pride
But for me it's not that simple,
To push the memories aside.

Yes you made me stronger
In much more than just one way.
But does that really justify
The price I had to pay?

Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2009-10-02 05:24 PM

wow Leanne its been awhile i loved this a lot!!!

Krysti

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

2 posted 2009-10-03 01:52 AM

thanks for the feedback krysti, i know i havent posted in ages just been getting so caught up in everything and had a bit of a creative block, hopefully it comes back to me soon

-Lee

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2009-11-07 06:30 PM

very smooth rhyming~~
M

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