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Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-10-20 08:05 PM

I wish I was something special
Something magnificent and great
To mean something more then that
But your my heavy weight

Am I a disappointment
Inside those deep blue eyes?
I'm sorry I can't be better
But why do you despise?

I wish I was shining
Something brilliant in the sun
Forever in your spotlight
But still my tears run

Why can't I be better?
Your too blind to see the truth
I wish I was something beautiful
Something meaningful to you..

( I ask myself this all the time when I stare in the mirror)

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2009-10-21 01:36 AM

Hey Zach,

I ask myself the same questions

(except I have brown eyes, lol)

Nice write! I think we should talk more, send me an email, okay!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-10-21 09:17 PM

Oh my freakin' gosh.

This is the most bestest poem you have ever written! Guaranteed! It flows so nicely and has lots of emotion in it too.
But don't feel discouraged.

I could go on about how everyone is unique and has their own talents and stuff but I know that probably wouldn't help much.

library for sures

P.S. I LOVE the third stanza.

{~~*~~}

P.P.S. you can talk to me you know..I Will listen.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2009-10-22 09:13 PM

I wish I was something special
Something magnificent and great

you are.....

Krysti

loveyourself102
Junior Member

since 2009-10-11

Posts 48

4 posted 2009-10-22 09:18 PM

i feel the same way id love to tlk wit u i will listen u know.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

5 posted 2009-10-25 05:50 PM

zach, oh my gooodnesss. i haven't been on in a while, and it shows. but now when i signed on again, i wanted to read something amazing, and i did. this was stunning and wonderful and heartbreaking all in one. i feel this way so many times its horrific.
ugh, i miss talking to you!!!!
i shall email you.
this deserves to be libraried a million and one times.
so i'll do the "and one".

*hugs*

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2009-10-27 01:56 PM

Awww thanks guys! *hugs*

-Zach

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

7 posted 2009-10-27 06:28 PM

ZACH!!!
hehe, i emailed you.
you should check it, lol.
'cause i sent it like...last week, and i have NO REPLY!!! tis okay.
i forgive you., lol.

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 15
england

8 posted 2009-10-27 06:36 PM

thats amazing.
that really is deep.
i think this is one of the best poems ive read so far.
very nice

xx

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

9 posted 2009-10-28 05:57 PM

nice write,add another to your collection of masterpieces between pictures and poems

Thick_Goddness_973
Junior Member

since 2009-10-25

Posts 13

10 posted 2009-10-29 08:13 PM

wow.... that's deep... REALLY deep.... had put a knot in my heart too. made me think of "i cried for you" and "hazel eyes".... absolutely stupendous, fantastic job!

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

11 posted 2009-10-29 08:38 PM

**tear tear** awseome job zach!had me take a look in the mirror myself and then i asked myself, wat i think of me.... made me reflect... fantastical work!

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

12 posted 2009-11-05 04:52 PM

Thanks everyone! So glad to see my work is actually being read. lol

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