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Leanne <3
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0 posted 2009-10-31 11:26 PM


For Kate:

I’ve been sitting here for ages
Trying to fill these pages
With something that may actually mean
More than words on your screen

I thought of how to heal
The pain you try to conceal
How I could make you see
There’s a way out of this debris

I’ve pondered without end
To find words that will transcend
Words that will make you believe
That you are much better than you perceive

But I couldn’t find a way
Or the right words to say
That I will listen to your plea
In hope to set you free

So this is my way of telling you
I will always help you through
If life’s troubles seem too great
Just hold my hand, I’ll share the weight.


Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har

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1 posted 2009-11-05 01:56 PM


I would say that Kate is a very lucky girl to have a friend like you.  Hope you printed this to keep and read one day when you are much older.

Nicely done!

        
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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2009-11-07 06:32 PM


that's what friends are for~~

nicely expressed, Leanne

M

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