Teen Poetry #9 |
My Life Would Suck Without You |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I guess it wasn't right to throw all your stuff out Because you dared to break my heart Don't bother screaming or shout. I guess I was wrong When I told you good-bye I know you still love me But I'm starting to think that's a lie. My life pretty much sucks And you know this too Because you stole a piece of me And my life is empty without you I try to move on But memories won't let me go I trusted you with the key But you used me so. I shouldn't miss you Because what is there to miss? You promised little And didn't even give me one kiss. My heart and head Are getting in another fight Don't know what to do... Lost my sense of what is right |
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lilmissflyaway Junior Member
since 2009-01-19
Posts 15ohio,usa |
i really liked it i totally get where your coming from |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
nice poem zach, I really liked it. |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
nice job! <3 i love u<3 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what you need to do is to remember what you are worth, and realize that, that stupid little girl has no idea how wonderful you are, and you don't want or need anyone that doesn't think you are the best, ya know? it's easy to forget that we deserve as much love as we give and if they can't give it back then they aren't worth getting yours! stand up straight. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Ah, thanks Zach you got that stupid song stuck in my head |
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