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0 posted 2009-01-19 09:53 AM


I guess it wasn't right
to throw all your stuff out
Because you dared to break my heart
Don't bother screaming or shout.

I guess I was wrong
When I told you good-bye
I know you still love me
But I'm starting to think that's a lie.

My life pretty much sucks
And you know this too
Because you stole a piece of me
And my life is empty without you

I try to move on
But memories won't let me go
I trusted you with the key
But you used me so.

I shouldn't miss you
Because what is there to miss?
You promised little
And didn't even give me one kiss.

My heart and head
Are getting in another fight
Don't know what to do...
Lost my sense of what is right  

© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
lilmissflyaway
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since 2009-01-19
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1 posted 2009-01-19 02:02 PM


i really liked it
i totally get where your coming from

Elias Nevermore
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2 posted 2009-01-19 03:37 PM


nice poem zach, I really liked it.
KandyGrl511
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3 posted 2009-02-28 12:19 PM


nice job!

<3 i love u<3

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4 posted 2009-02-28 12:27 PM


what you need to do is to remember what you are worth, and realize that, that stupid little girl has no idea how wonderful you are, and you don't want or need anyone that doesn't think you are the best, ya know?



it's easy to forget that we deserve as much love as we give and if they can't give it back then they aren't worth getting yours!

stand up straight.

GothicCherry
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5 posted 2009-03-03 08:49 AM


Ah, thanks Zach you got that stupid song stuck in my head
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