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since 2008-02-02
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0 posted 2009-10-31 12:46 PM


You shall not ever be considered as you were
but as another piece of history
You said you'll love me forever
But now its a mystery

I'll never forget you
burning my mind with your passionate hate
But your love was not true
and for you a terrible fate

If you only felt my pain
I'll trade you back, no fare
But my storm cloud will continue to rain
and baby i don't care
© Copyright 2009 Keagan lear - All Rights Reserved
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
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1 posted 2009-10-31 09:39 AM

Dude, that first stanza was killer. I couldn't even come up with something like that.

Keep up the writing
XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 2009-11-02 10:03 PM

Wow..I definitely think this is one of the best poems I have ever read by you.  

Keep it up.

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EmilyTheStrange
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