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Teen Poetry #9

Memories of You

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-10-30 04:34 PM

They haunt my pain-filled, broken eyes;
my smile is wearing thin.

I've told myself ten-billion lies
and still they won't give in.

I've fought, I've asked, I've even begged,
but they just won't comply.

My mind says "Just get over him."
I think I'd rather die.

My heart says you still care for me.
I don't know if that's true.

But either way I can't forget
these memories of you.

[This message has been edited by UNTAMEDelegance (10-31-2009 02:20 AM).]

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

1 posted 2009-10-31 12:48 PM

loved this one, good write
-Lee

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2009-11-02 05:09 AM

I have no idea what made me open your poem.. actually i think i was thinking about the same thing and the title drew me in.. BUT WOW.. i'll be reading all your work in future!! Raw, Pure Talent.

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