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Teen Poetry #9

Together It's One

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

0 posted 2009-10-25 08:37 PM

Rain is falling,

yet it’s not raining.

It comes from the trees,

their tears,

and they fall with each other,

Blending their emotions.

Becoming one.

Stronger.

Thick_Goddness_973
Junior Member

since 2009-10-25

Posts 13

1 posted 2009-10-29 08:24 PM

wow... this one really spoke to me in particular... i think what you're trying to say is that the rain drops are falling from the trees, using the metaphor that the trees are crying. Then your saying that the tears comes together. I think the overall message here is that people band together so that they can each "cry" on each other's shoulders.... just like how tears of rain band together to become one.... Excellent poem

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

2 posted 2009-10-29 08:34 PM

right again cassie! it's like, it had to make me think a min lol. but to me that's what a good poem does... great job!

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

3 posted 2009-10-31 03:20 PM

Thanks All! :P And your right about the meaning.

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