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flyinwiild
New Member

since 2009-10-07

Posts 9

0 posted 2009-10-07 03:53 PM

  i can feel it in the air tonight,
something is much different.
look up at the sky of lights,
and tell me you dont see it.
  can't you feel the wild winds
pulling at your heart?
the way we dance on moonlit streets,
this night, it must be ours.
  hold me tightly in your arms,
im scared i might fall down.
i know we must by flying
cause my feet now touch no ground.
  oh, dont let the clock catch up,
cause then we'll find the time.
the sun will rise above east cities
and light will fill our sky.
  baby just hold on tonight,
can we not live here for a while?
i cannot face the world again,
its much too dead to fly. .

can't you feel the air tonight?
its sweet smell lingers still.
and this feeling--we're lost in time
we'll never find again.
-bridge

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-10-07 06:32 PM

Welcome to Pip!!!!!!!

Great first post! I really loved this.

Hope to see more of your work.

-Zach

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2009-10-08 02:42 AM

Like a dance without any doubt or care; works for me.

Loved the images. Good air is hard to find.

There is power in the pen.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2009-10-09 04:34 AM

lovely... welcome to Passions
Krysti

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

4 posted 2009-10-09 11:50 AM

"can't you feel the air tonight?
its sweet smell lingers still.
and this feeling--we're lost in time
we'll never find again"

Aah...such nice thoughts...

lovely...

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

5 posted 2009-10-09 05:55 PM

Welcome to pip!

Nice poem!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

6 posted 2009-10-25 08:12 PM

Welcome to PiP!! I've enjoyed this piece.

Arana Darkwolf

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

7 posted 2009-10-31 12:59 PM

aww this reminds me of all the fun times i had with friends when i wish the night would never end. Great write

-Lee

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