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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2009-10-14 05:28 PM

Hey Guys, Sorta been a while. Um.. so i guess this is a typical parents divorce, the one that did wrong you hate (before you flame there's more behind the scenes that i won't mention here) and then your left with the parent who you think will stand by you and your family but you know from your friends etc that it won't last long and he'll move on too.. My dad did.. Three months after she left.. So it's just me and the little brother and Amelia now.. Prob not the best poem of the day, but it means a lot to me..

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PARENTAL DIVORCE (BROKEN MEMORIES)

Your not worth these salty tears
Falling down my pretty face
I’m sorry that i’m not good enough
And that i am your disgrace

I think i hate you more than mum
At least she seemed to care
But you don’t really give a damn
I guess life is never fair

I’ve had enough I really have
Hell, I can’t do this anymore
I’m tired of the disappointment
That leaves me crying on the floor

It hurts like hell it really does
I can’t seem to stand the pain
You think money fixes everything
But it just makes me more insane

So tell me how to breathe again
Cause right now i’m not so sure
I’m tired of these goddarn tears
And i can’t do this anymore

Daddy, i'm so sorry
For all the things i've said
Your not worth the pretty tears
But i don't want you dead

I still can't forgive you
What is done, is done
You can have your new life
And i guess i'll have your son

So this is how it goes
As you walk out this door
You leave your broken box of memories
Lying on the floor

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-10-15 03:28 PM

Outstanding as always.

-Zach

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2009-10-17 03:55 AM

chilling.. loved a lot
Krysti

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2009-10-20 05:50 PM

I absolutely love this.
the stanza:

So tell me how to breathe again
Cause right now i’m not so sure
I’m tired of these goddarn tears
And i can’t do this anymore

was most definitely my favorite part.

Stay strong pretty girl.

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EmilyTheStrange
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nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

4 posted 2009-10-21 04:36 PM

Your not worth these salty tears
Falling down my pretty face
I’m sorry that i’m not good enough
And that i am your disgrace

This part reminds me of my dad... when my mom died he left me with my sister... he can't even remember my birthday

asarosestoleherattention
Junior Member

since 2009-10-27

Posts 15
england

5 posted 2009-10-27 07:20 PM

amazing,
gave me the chills.
<3

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

6 posted 2009-10-27 09:44 PM

wow amazing!

Thick_Goddness_973
Junior Member

since 2009-10-25

Posts 13

7 posted 2009-10-29 08:11 PM

OMG loved it! emotion, words made me think n jus wanna weep for you! BEE-U-TEE-FULL!

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

8 posted 2009-10-29 08:40 PM

i feel ur pain... made me think bout my dad n his BS... awesome message and reall life emotions too...

Always,
Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

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