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Teen Poetry #9
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asarosestoleherattention
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since 2009-10-27
Posts 15
england
0 posted 2009-10-29 09:43 AM

tears are blue
and tears are red,
tears are a clue
when you literally dead.

cuts are wide
and cuts are deep,
cuts subside
but i still weep.

natalie fairbrace ('r)
and she was the soul of the party,
until they knew her.
© Copyright 2009 Natalie Fairbrace - All Rights Reserved
Thick_Goddness_973
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since 2009-10-25
Posts 13
1 posted 2009-10-29 08:08 PM

wow... really deep poem- loved it
precious pearls
Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
2 posted 2009-10-29 08:41 PM

had a lot of depth to it...

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)
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